Creative Writing Goals

1. better description
2. good sentences beginning
3. less errors

Monday, May 17, 2010

The Glass Bottle

Everything is just sitting around outside talking to each other, when all of a sudden someone yells, “Run”.

Everyone adrenalin starts rushing throughout their veins as we all start sprinting for the apartment. Looking behind we see three of our friends trailing us and babbling on about what just happened. Apparently someone threw a glass bottle over a ledge of a hill and it almost hit someone. Who randomly throws a glass bottle anyway? We all bolt into the hostess apartment room and gaze out the window at the man who one of my bonehead friends almost hit. The man was stalking the area looking for the person who threw almost shattered a piece of glass over his head. In the midst of all this one of our friends was still outside text as the man walked by and he started asking him questions. Being question our friend just started walking a different direction and didn’t say anything. When the man ventured off to where he came from, we immediately went back outside like nothing ever happened. This minor mishap didn’t turn out with any consequence, but there could have been many.

Sunday, May 9, 2010

Bullying

Everyday that you step into the school that you are supposed to learn at there are people heckling an following you around, just to make you feel bad. Although this may seem farfetched to some it is very real in our world today. In fact 77% students in the United States are bullied in someone way. Coming to school every day for those who get the treatment daily can become traumatizing and could eventually lead to depression or ever worse; death. When getting bullied the victim is usually defenseless and has no place to go or person to relay on for help. If someone see’s bullying they should step in and stop the situation as soon as possible to the victim doesn’t suffer punishment more than they need to. Reaching to violence could be dangerous for both the bully and the victim because someone could seriously get damaged. It may seem unrealistic, but 100,000 kids in the U.S. bring guns to school every day because of bullying or intimidation. To have to bring a gun to school to feel safe is not how students in America should feel over any circumstance. bullying is a huge problem in our world today; bullying needs to be stopped; bullying is harmful to everyone involved. Bullying can traumatize students life’s and futures forever.