Creative Writing Goals

1. better description
2. good sentences beginning
3. less errors

Tuesday, June 1, 2010

War comparison

When looking comparing and contrasting the Civil War and the Revolutionary war you find many differences and similarities. One obvious difference between the two wars is that the Civil War was the north vs the south and the Revolutionary War was the colonies vs Great Britain. Another difference is that the Revolutionary War was two countries fighting each other, while the Civil War was two different men in one part of the country fight agents men the other part of the country. Onto that the Revolutionary War was when the colonies came together for one cause, freedom. While the Revolutionary War was a war when the colonies got divided into the north and the south fighting agents each other.
Although there are many differences between these two very important wars in our history, they are also very similar in their own ways. Beginning with that they were both battles for freedom. The Revolutionary War was the colonies trying to free themselves from Great Britain and the Civil war was the north trying to free slaves in the south. Another similarity is that both of the Wars took place on American Soil. Of course the Civil War did because it was a war between the South and the North and during the Revolutionary War was fought to kick the British off American soil. These are a few of the similarities and differences between the Revolutionary War and the Civil War in American history.

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