Creative Writing Goals
1. better description
2. good sentences beginning
3. less errors
2. good sentences beginning
3. less errors
Friday, April 16, 2010
The Battle of Antietam intro
As the radiant red sun of the morning rises over the horizon I awake from my deep sleep. As the light puddles in from the great outdoors I take in this beautiful morning that is now upon me. Today is September 17th, 1862, which means today I go to Antietam Creek in hope of catching tonight’s supper. Although I live in Sharpsburg Maryland the creak is not far away from my house. I fallow the usual morning schedule and set out with my bamboo pole that my father made for me and worms I gathered last night. Stepping into the cool brisk air I can see a crisp frost for miles on end silently sitting on the blades of the grass.
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